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Only To Remain Lonely::

by ~vanillaextract

Only To Remain Lonely~
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Tonight I collapsed into a reverie
Another one of you and me
Wishes that I was your only
Time lapses ever so slowly

My dear, have we been created only to remain lonely?

It was
Where roses were red and violets were blue
Because
All that mattered was me and you
Clouds were covering up the sun
But at least I'd know you're the only one

Comings and ocean eyes
Whispered you'd be here forever
Later I received the surprise
Of not knowing where to hide in your stormy weather
Oxygen shortage; perpetual misery

My dear, have I been created only to remain lonely?

It was
Where roses were red and violets were blue
Because
All that mattered was me and you
Clouds were covering up the sun
But at least I'd know you're the only one

Lightning struck down; earth trembled
Chaos in this life just won't cease to assemble
Another whisper in my ear
No longer are you able to remain here
(No longer will I remain lonely)

It was
Where roses were red and violets were blue
Because
All that mattered was me and you
Clouds were covering up the sun
But at least I'd know you're the only one

It was
Where roses were red and violets were blue
Because
All that mattered was me and you
Clouds were covering up the sun
But at least I'd know you're the only one

My dear, without you I am no longer lonely
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Hmm...

So simple and sweet, with a hidden message.
Totally love the album "Ocean Eyes" by Owl City.
Hence "Comings and ocean eyes..." because I just like the ring to it.

*shrugs*
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Please specify what areas you'd like critiqued in your author's comments and resubmit to #project-improve. Thank you.
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~stonedInc Mar 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Is this the final stage? Any alterations coming up?
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~vanillaextract Mar 10, 2010  Student Writer
Ah... I'm afraid so. This is quite an old piece, so no - I don't think I'll be working on it anymore.
I'm just curious, but... why do you ask?

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xxx
"There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you."
~Maya Angelou
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~stonedInc Mar 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Well hoping to read more, that's why. I kind of felt you just did a rough work. :)
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~vanillaextract Mar 11, 2010  Student Writer
Haha, well... I have more poetry I will submit in the future. Like I said, this was written a long time before I ever typed it; I didn't really put forth that much effort. ^^;

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"There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you."
~Maya Angelou
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~Annabella-and-Jasper Feb 13, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
nice :)

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~vanillaextract Feb 13, 2010  Student Writer
Thanks. : ]

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"There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you."
~Maya Angelou
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